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[ludO723]

DA link:
http://ludo723.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-ch-417-p05-06-98853472

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[Jaime F.]

Nice Lud0723, I like it almost all of it, except maybe Fukasaku being blue. Just a preference thing, because i'm used to seeing him the color green. Now it's not the best coloring i've seen, but by no means is it bad. If I had to give your coloring a percentage grade out of 100%, I would give it about 83%, which is a little above average. Now the 1 thing I really like, is how you added page 5 and 6 together to make it look kind of like a doublespread. It's not the first time i've seen this done, but never the less, it's a great idea. Anyways, just to let you know, I do consider this coloring worthy of being saved, and I am currently useing it for my screen saver. In conclusion, I think you're past 3 colorings have been fairly good, and I found 2 of them worthy of being saved. As of now, I definetly think you're a creative artist, but I still think there's room for improvement as far as your coloring skills go. Either way, it seems like you're on the right track, so make sure to keep practicing, and stick with it. If you do that, i'm sure you'll eventually get really good.

 

[ludO723]

Thank you Jaime F. for having commented.
For the doublespread,
I just opened a new document the size of two pages that I colorized, then, I then paste the one next to another. It's nice to ça me tell you, right? Because I am not sure to have understand the conerning the doublespread.

 

[Jaime F.]

Thank you Jaime F. for having commented.
For the doublespread,
I just opened a new document the size of two pages that I colorized, then, I then paste the one next to another. It's nice to ça me tell you, right? Because I am not sure to have understand the conerning the doublespread.

You're welcome Lud0723, but i'm not sure what you're asking about in reference to doublespreads. I'm just saying that the way you put 2 pages together makes it look like a doublespread. It's a good idea, and i've honestly only seen 3 colorings like this, that used the same idea. It was a while ago, and the other artist who put 2 pages together, used the pages where Asuma gave tips to Naruto on how to use his wind chakra, and then throws his chakra conducting weapon through a big rock. The other one I saw, had Deidara, and Madara, known as Tobi at the time, catching the 3 tails bijuu. Anyways, I hope this sort of answers your question. It's a very cool idea, and it's rarely done. So no worries, I happen to like it.

 

[Orochimaru]

not bad, but you can do better

 

[alpvonkri]

Good job!!!

 

[Sherlock2008]

that must be a huge and hard work!

anyways,it's really worth

 

[thewar]

why the frog is of the color blue? usually in manga the blue color is used for the black color