|420-19| A Color

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A tomorrow for the complete page

I sleep,and tomorrow school and i finished this page colorize.

this is just a preview
 
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nice..
 

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Looks very good, war. :kkthumbs
 

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Nice one thewar, I really like it. Your manga panel colorings are getting better for sure. I'm obviously a bigger fan of your manga colorings than your fanart, but you have had some good ideas every once in a while. I'm more difficult to please than most people when it comes to fanart, so don't take it the wrong way. Well anyways, it's nice to see a panel coloring from chapter 420 so early, it's a bonus in addition to getting to see, and save Kishimoto's colored pages from the new chapter before it's translated. If somebody reading this isn't aware that they can see, and save the colored pictures from the new chapter, go to the spoiler section. There's a link there to JoJohot's Chinese translated version of chapter 420. Dynamic Dragon has also posted the chapter 420 cover, here in the Naruto arts section. So it shouldn't be to difficult to find it. Well thewar, I think this panel coloring of yours looks pretty good, and because of that, as well as me always giving you a hard time, I willl start you off with 4 stars. Hopefully people will agree with my rating, but you never know. By the way, I'm very criticle about your fanarts, cause there are a lot of things you can get better at. I even suggest studying, and observing the art of an artist, that you really respect. Try to learn, and mimic some of the technique's you're interested in, and practice them until your hands fall off. Ok, maybe not until your hands fall off, but you know just analyze carefully with your eyes, and try to apply these new techniques into your own art. To make those technique's more original, try adding an aspect of your personality into it, and change a couple thing about it. I know easier said then done, but never the less you try it. By the way, I missed the part about you coloring the whole page. I'm looking forward to seeing it, so good luck, and make sure to give it your all.
 
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i don't like much the lines...
 

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can you clean this page?
 

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yeah , i clean this page, you want the line art?

Add page , sorry for the delay
 

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Good job for the most part thewar. The only thing that I find strange, is Jiraiya's eyes. His right eye's iris, looks like an upside down triangle, and the left side's iris, is diamond shaped instead of being round. As for the rest of your coloring, I think all the panels look fairly good. Maybe the panel with Dan, and Tsunade's little brother could be a little less dark. Fukasaku looks decent, and so does Jiraiya, not counting his eyes. Last but not least, is Tsunade, and I actually think she looks good through out the whole page. So overall, I think you did fairly well. You just need to refine your skills some more, and be more consistent.
 

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very good work i like this page a lot ^^
 

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thanks a all
 
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