Very nice Lyra, I almost overlooked this thinking it was your Sasuke overload post. Well anyways, it looks really good, and it's good to see a coloring of a different character other than Sasuke. After seeing your past 2 Sasuke overloads, and this, I'm really curious to see what other Naruto characters would look like in your coloring style, especially Naruto himself. The only thing I can see that could be considered a mistake in your current coloring, is what RyuSensei mentioned about Pain's ninja boots. He refered to them as socks, but I call then ninja boots, because they're open toed, and have that white ankle to leg part that people frequently call socks. So yeah you colored it as flesh instead, but it doesn't look bad, and it's only something Naruto fans would catch on to. Well overall, it looks really good, and I'm impressed. Keep up the good work, and keep those colorings coming in. Most of us here really enjoy seeing your colorings. For me, it's like a breathe of fresh air, or a taste of something different, it's a good thing for sure, so keep it up.