its a step in the right direction i suppose. at least the lines are smooth yeah. however, there is still so much to be done with it. you have posted a fair number of colorings here now, and im sorry but i dont get why you dont put more effort into it.
even if you stick with cellshading, you can add a lot of neat effects, or at least, pay more attention to shading to make it more interesting. i suggest you read a few tutorials on cellshading and give it another go!
