[431] 13 panel 1

[ziaja]

 

[thewar]

not bad, but the bg I'dont like.

 

[Giilshark]

good work Ziaja.

 

[AndreCnJ]

Nice, i dont like the background

 

[Toobi]

great work ziaja!, i like the colours that you used, bro why you stoped to post the linearts? i miss them

 

[TheChosenOne]

Looks very good, ziaja.

 

[◆ T.D.A ◆]

I see you like the anime colours for Pain.

 

[Googlez_kun]

i agree with the others about the bg,
but nevertheless its a really wonderful piece of art

 

[- aMt -]

hey Ziaja-san..

it's great ...

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i love this action..

 

[Jaime F.]

Good job Ziaja, I like it. All your colorings have been really good lately, but this one is one of my favorite ones. This was also 1 of my favorite panels from the latest chapter, so it's good to see this in color. Now I know some people don't like the motion effects, but I do. I also like how Pain's metal rod appears to have a sharp edge now. I don't remember if it looked like that originally, but it looks more like a sword now, and I think it looks cooler that way.

Well, the only thing I don't like about this panel, and it's not your fault, is the position of Naruto's arms when he throws a punch. It looks cool, but in real life, the arm, and hand that isn't throwing a punch, should cover up the body, as well as part of the face for better defense. Naruto's so fast now that it doesn't matter, and I know its just a manga, but you might find this interesting, although you might disagree. Well anyways, Bruce Lee was very critical about the way traditional martial arts taught people to keep one fist at the side, while throwing a punch. The reason why, is because you leave your midsection wide open, and vulnerable when you do that. If you look at Naruto's midsection in this panel, you'll see that it isn't covered, or protected well at all. I was a 1st degree black belt in Taekwondo, so I was taught to punch the same way Naruto is, but if you think about it, what Bruce Lee said makes a lot of sense. The style of punch Naruto is using in this panel, is the traditional Karate, and Taekwondo way of punching. However Bruce Lee often used whatever technique, from any style of fighting he found useful. Lee often used a Wing Chun kung fu style of defense, and he also used western boxing's defenses.

 

[Orochimaru]

nice ziaja
i don't like the bg too, because u can do better

 

[polaris]

i like all the parts; but if orochimaru says u can do better then i agree.

 

[Egaki 21]

nice i like it^^