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wow, nice effect
 

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i don't like the effect
 

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nice
 

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Faster Naruto move!
 

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very nice though the skin should be a little lighter and hair more orange..
 

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i like it!:)
i think the blurr is a bit too much though,but i think its good if you lower it a bit in the last two panels...
 

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Great stuff!
But I think you abused the effects.
You should do a little less of effect.
In the last tables, it was very exaggerated! But you did a good job with colors.
 

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Thanks guys for comments and opinion :) I have edited it a little :) How it's now ?
 

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I think it's better now :)

Although I don't like it that you made pain's hair brown instead of orange.

Keep it up! (I like the blur in the background)
 

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good^^

But I think you abused the effects.²
 

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Decent page coloring Shaddy85, for the most part, I like it. The only thing I don't like about this, is the overuse of effects. Now I'm not totally against using effects, but a more subtle approach, would probably look better. For instance, Naruto's scroll looks to blurry, and so does the last panel. Well, besides my criticism about the blur effect, I think you did a pretty good job with the overall coloring of this page, and to be honest, I'm beginning to enjoy your colorings a lot more now.
 
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