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[pineappleherb]

few weeks old

dig em

 

[Y-on]

Color selections could be better, and the red gradient is a little much on the first page. For both, overall shading could be improved, remember to keep in mind your light source's direction and intensity.

 

[alpvonkri]

The upper part is too red, but it's a good job!!!

 

[Googlez_kun]

agree with tsuny!
anyway good job!

 

[- aMt -]

donts bad

 

[Jaime F.]

I like the second panel a lot, good job. The page coloring has a few good sections, but also has a couple iffy parts. Good work though, so keep it up.