[437] Hinata

orikugan · Feb 28, 2009

Hinata from the Naruto' chapter 437. Line by Z2k

http://orikugan.deviantart.com/art/Hnata-114435653 :tem

nat · Feb 28, 2009

Ok...Hinata color number 1000000.... (I knew many people would color it, so I'm not complaining

) Ok, let's get down to business.

I applaud your effort but there are somethings off with the coloring such as the hair. It pops up the first thing. Hair strands are not random with crossing lines. The lower part is decently done, but the upper part (the crown of her head) takes away from any effort you did. I think you tried highlights or varying colors but it came out a mess.
It's always good to keep things simple when you are not sure. If you kept the upper part similar to lower, IMO it would have been much better.

That said, I think you chose a good color for the skin. Might need more definition in shading but for now it's good

. I like the definition in her fingers....Nice touch

Sorry if I came somewhat negative, but constructive criticism is always the best thing for improvement. Keep up the good work!

Jaime F. · Feb 28, 2009

Kind of cool, I like what you were trying to do with Hinata's hair. The rest of your coloring is decent, the only thing I don't like to much, is how you colored her mouth. Besides that, I think your coloring's pretty cool.

orikugan · Feb 28, 2009

e-nat said:
Ok...Hinata color number 1000000.... (I knew many people would color it, so I'm not complaining ) Ok, let's get down to business.

I applaud your effort but there are somethings off with the coloring such as the hair. It pops up the first thing. Hair strands are not random with crossing lines. The lower part is decently done, but the upper part (the crown of her head) takes away from any effort you did. I think you tried highlights or varying colors but it came out a mess.
It's always good to keep things simple when you are not sure. If you kept the upper part similar to lower, IMO it would have been much better.

That said, I think you chose a good color for the skin. Might need more definition in shading but for now it's good . I like the definition in her fingers....Nice touch

Sorry if I came somewhat negative, but constructive criticism is always the best thing for improvement. Keep up the good work!