[437] Six tailed

[thewar]

First time for me for working a double page.

Is a bad work.

 

[Googlez_kun]

I...somehow like it^^
though i don't like the clouds in the foreground
great job!

 

[Zabuza2k]

really good
but i think u muss more work with the shadow

 

[TheChosenOne]

Looks very good, war.

 

[JMC]

the smoke looks wierd but is cool i like it

 

[- aMt -]

great job

 

[KnuckleheadedNinja]

looks good.

 

[Giilshark]

great version!

 

[Jaime F.]

Well, when i read your introduction, I expected this to be really bad, but it's really not. I actually kind of like it. You colored almost everything cleanly, and the only thing I'd prefer to be different, is the color of the bones. Maybe white, or an even lighter shade of gray would of been better. Besides that, everything's better than you think it is. Well, for your 1st double spread, you did fairly well, so you should color them more often. Keep up the good work TheWar, and keep practicing.

 

[SoldaT]

Its pretty good "thewar". One of your best colorings. Good work.

 

[lee-nus]

let me ask you, cuz obviously you make an insane amount of naruto coloring: how do you work? mouse? photoshop? do you ever take light into account when coloring?
im sorry to say this, but it kinda looks as if you are closing your eyes when placing the shading. you need to keep a constant light source in mind, or your shading will be all over the place. now, this is one of the better ones i've seen you do but still, try and stick to the same light source through out the entire picture. unless u use several light sources. also, there is no point in just blasting out two new colorings every day, is there? try to put a bit more quality into each one instead. its not like you get paid for each and every one you make, right?

 

[killbill]

good work...though i don't like the clouds..

 

[.Sinist3r]

Good ... but I don't like naruto texture.

 

[thewar]

yes, i never think of take light.
You can give tutorial link of it?

 

[VASSiLi]

I totally agree with Lee-nus. You have do a lot of jobs, but they all need more lights and shadows, because your cell shade isn't still perfect ^^

 

[lee-nus]

yes, i never think of take light.
You can give tutorial link of it?

link? tutorial? there is no tutorial to teach you how light falls, as far as i know. look at photos if you need reference, otherwise just imagine where light would fall.

paying attention to light is crucial when advancing from beginner level coloring i think.

 

[tubeyo]

Credo che sia uno dei tuoi lavori migliori, l'effetto del kyubi è ben reso, ma con un po' più di tempo sono certo che sarebbe potuto venire anche meglio. Come ti hanno detto gli altri cerca di fare pratica con la sorgente luminosa, e vedrai che il risultato ne gioverà

 

[thewar]

thanks