[446]

[SoldaT]

*Spoiler pic from chapter 446*



(C) Lines and coloring by me

 

[pineappleherb]

Re: [446]*spoiler pic*

there are probably a lot of tips other people will give, but here's mine

you did pretty good on the color choices, but the black lines kinda throw it off, imo

add a layer over the entire image, make it a dark color (i chose a dark blue), and set the layer to lighten

here, like this

the blue atmosphere helps, imo


btw, one more thing, i just noticed the highlight on nagato's hair

you don't need to add a highlight on every single image you color, especially one thats dark like this one

 

[- aMt -]

Re: [446]*spoiler pic*

great

 

[lee-nus]

Re: [446]*spoiler pic*

okay, first of all... i think ppl should either stick to cellshading, or to a softer style of shading over all. between cellshading and soft shading i mean, not something in between, where the edges are blurred. that, in my opinion, looks really bad.
things to point out:
the rain is only in the background, yet they are soaked
the glare in nagato's eye goes outside the eye
nagato has no upper lip
also, i have no idea where the light source is.
and listen to pineappleherb, the black isnt really good for the image.

ok, thats it, just a few pointers. good luck!

 

[Y-on]

Re: [446]*spoiler pic*

okay, first of all... i think ppl should either stick to cellshading, or to a softer style of shading over all. between cellshading and soft shading i mean, not something in between, where the edges are blurred. that, in my opinion, looks really bad.
things to point out:
the rain is only in the background, yet they are soaked
the glare in nagato's eye goes outside the eye
nagato has no upper lip
also, i have no idea where the light source is.
and listen to pineappleherb, the black isnt really good for the image.

ok, thats it, just a few pointers. good luck!

That's a good point, many people think that by blurring the edges or making hard shadows with the soft brush that automatically makes it soft shading. Soft shading includes good blending over all else. Lee-nus and Pineapple pretty much said the rest.