[450-thewar] The New Hogake

[thewar]

http://swordgolden.deviantart.com/art/New-Hogake-125318110

 

[Zenon]

colorato molto bene!!!!!

 

[DarkFlameDragon]

good job ^^ i like it but there's something i don't like about shika's dad on the last panel,i just can't put my finger on it

 

[genny@b]

bel lavoro thewar!!
good work

 

[tEchIe]

nice job !
maybe next time you should try going for a more interesting page...

good job ^^ i like it but there's something i don't like about shika's dad on the last panel,i just can't put my finger on it

I think it's a combination of his beard not well defined, his nose shadow feels unnatural, his eyes are missing some age lines and the mouth trace doesn't convey a sense of frustration but rather a sense of confusion and dumbfounds ...
I think...

 

[DarkFlameDragon]

nice job !
maybe next time you should try going for a more interesting page...



I think it's a combination of his beard not well defined, his nose shadow feels unnatural, his eyes are missing some age lines and the mouth trace doesn't convey a sense of frustration but rather a sense of confusion and dumbfounds ...
I think...

oh yeah that's right

 

[okamy]

great coloring

 

[VASSiLi]

Bel lavoro! Se posso permettermi vedo un netto miglioramento dai tuoi primi lavori! Unica pecca, avrei voluto vedere colorata una pagina un pò più movimentata che non questa, anche se è difficile trovarne di movimentate in questi ultimi cap <.<

 

[pineappleherb]

dont care for it, nothing special, sryz

 

[- aMt -]

Good page

 

[Jaime F.]

Looks like you've improved quite a bit Thewar, good job. In fact, you surprised me. I even saved it, so now I have 3 of your colorings saved on my computer. Well, you're finally making some noticeable progress Thewar, so keep it up.