Your colorings are huge lol, but that's okay. Maybe more people prefer them that way, I honestly don't know. For me, it just makes it more difficult to see your coloring as a whole. Maybe I'm being lazy, but it's honestly more effort to scroll up, and down your whole coloring. Other than that though, from what I saw, it looks pretty good. It kind of reminds me of Orochimaru's version, but with white colored text, instead of gold.