[460-thewar] Naruto Angry

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I like it. However, I think that more shadows on the woods will improve it.
 

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looks good, nut is just simply colors'
 

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im confused at how the majority of his eyes are covered by shadow, except his iris is somehow reflecting light
 

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You got a point on that pine.

His chin is a bit flat but I think thats how it looks on the actual page. Cool coloring man.
 

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Looks good, but for me he doesn't look angry :p
 

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Ye, I agree with Black Lagoon. Btw, keep up the good work.
 

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The only thing I don't like, and this is just my personal opinion, is the pink shadow. I usually prefer darker shadows, but the rest of it looks good.
 
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