462 - Sasuke's Attack! [WIP]

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Probably I won't finish it and i don't know why XD
Just to keep me in training ^^
Avices about shading and technical are very appreciated ^^.
 
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THE shade on the face is too dark should be light coming fom right to left becz of chidori
 

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Thank e-man ^^
 

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scrap this one, try again using a bigger sized brush

and imagine a BRIGHT ASS BLUE LIGHT right behind his face
 

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Thanks pineapp. Why should i use a bigger sized brush and lost details ?
Anyway i'll would add lights after ^^
 

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the size of the brush doesnt matter. what matters it what feels easier for you to work with. generally, though, i use bigger brushes at an early stage and smaller ones as i go, for detailing etc.

as for the lighting, look at real life photos!
 

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Oh thanks to much lee, i'm your fan ^^
Thanks for you advices, when i'll have time i'll modify it!
 

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Probably I won't finish it and i don't know why XD
You should :"D

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You can still learn from it.
The work you've done up until now will go to waste.
It will look awesome when it's done. (do indeed keep the raikiri in mind like pineapple said)

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It will take time and effort. (everything does)
 

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good
 
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