[511]The New Mask.

[Chaotic Neutral]

Hi everyone, here's my first coloring from the latest chapter

This is my first work and I know there are mistakes but any advice is highly welcomed

http://kaze-hatsu.deviantart.com/art/Naruto-511-The-New-Mask-180294778

 

[Therhi]

It's actually quite good as is. The only problem I can say is really a problem is that the holes in the mask are a light colour. It makes it look as if there is light coming form the inside. If you make them darker than everything else, it should be fine.


Keep it up though!

 

[BAN_KAI]

the holes should be black

 

[lordHokage]

It looks animated. Not bad for first work.

 

[Chaotic Neutral]

It's actually quite good as is. The only problem I can say is really a problem is that the holes in the mask are a light colour. It makes it look as if there is light coming form the inside. If you make them darker than everything else, it should be fine.


Keep it up though!

I edited it

Thank you

the holes should be black

Thanks for the advice.

It looks animated. Not bad for first work.

Thank you

 

[Giilshark]

good jog man!

 

[Chaotic Neutral]

Thanks Giil.