Asuma 312 Cover

[Patrik_h88]

Yep done, not as good as i thought, but well still a progress for me.
hope u like him.

 

[destinator]

You just color one month now, do you ? I think it looks really awesome. I like all those fancy details...for example the light which comes from the cigarette. I would forget things like that =) I love it <3

 

[Patrik_h88]

Yeh 1 month exacly today=) but yeh I have been working with school stuff for a while too in PS, and I have coloured like 3-4 naruto pics before this, but this is the month when I got abit more serious about it and wanted to progress.
Thanks for comment.

 

[C4animax]

i know some people who could spend weeks on the same thing...(me)...and still have a low level coloring , so let me tell you your coloring is really good, at least i like it a lot .

My only comment would be on the cigarette light..seems quite strong for a cigarette .

Edit : Actually it's the best cover out now...imo

 

[Patrik_h88]

Thanks for comment.

Yeh the cigarette light is away to big, but yeh I could have done it "reality" sized. But than I think I would need to change the lightning source since the light from the cigg would barly be visible=).light from a moon or something maybe would work.
Hehe still good thoughts, I will think about how big the light is next time I colour anything=)

 

[kadoman]

Oh, right, I actually thought the light was from a campfire or something - never occurred to me it was from the cigarette - because it is quite strong, so I automatically assumed, because of the night sky, that you've imagined him out in front of a fire.

Pat, this is one of your best works - up there with the Sasori one. This is by far the best version of this cover I have seen. It stands out. It's got your style embedded in it (see, I can start to pick you out now!) and most importantly it's got mood and a slightly dangerous edge. You can feel that something is going on in this pic, like he's heard an ominous sound that's got his attention. Wonderful.

Only problem is those clouds again! But I always say that, don't I? I think maybe the line art should be softer on them?

I think I might be your biggest fan! *saves it to the Patrik file*

 

[Manji Yoshimitsu]

Hmm... I think a bit more shading would be nice... =/, but stil

Great!

 

[Zoe303]

It looks awesome to me!I didn't imagine it at night!so you've shown me another point of view!Thanks!!

 

[lee-nus]

wow, schysst! jag gillar ljuseffekterna från glöden! ska man kommentera något att ändra på, så kanske du kunde fixa molnen lite, annars är det riktigt bra! ^^

 

[kadoman]

Hey, you guys aren't Norweigan are ya's? That language looks cool anyway!

 

[Patrik_h88]

Thanks for the comment everyone.
Hehe the language is swedish
Yeh lol the light could be a from a campfire, I have never thought about that but its quite nice.
The clouds need working but its hard, I need to find a nice way to do them hehe..

"I think I might be your biggest fan! smile-big *saves it to the Patrik file*"
Hah lol nice to hear, I always love your comments, you are such a nice girl!

"wow, schysst! jag gillar ljuseffekterna från glöden! ska man kommentera något att ändra på, så kanske du kunde fixa molnen lite, annars är det riktigt bra! ^^"
Heheh tackar, ja, jag ska försöka göra molnen bättre i framtiden hah. Kul med lite svenskar här=)

 

[batanga]

I like it, only the smoke loosk a bit too "solid", if you know what I mean.

But yea, nice!!

 

[kadoman]

"I think I might be your biggest fan! smile-big *saves it to the Patrik file*"
Hah lol nice to hear, I always love your comments, you are such a nice guy!

Well, thanks! Why do I feel like I'm having a Haku moment in reverse? I'm a girl!

 

[Patrik_h88]

Hehe thanks Batanga, I think I know what u mean, maybe it would have been better if I deleted the lines for them and did a very small and transparant smoke instead. since its kinda thick now, abit like cloud.

"Well, thanks! Why do I feel like I'm having a Haku moment in reverse? amuse I'm a girl!"
OOH, im sorry I didnt know that, but its nice to hear u are! =).
I edited the post so now its "girl"=)

 

[vlado]

Greate Job , really , and i knew you where a girl :P

 

[Vhea]

well, not bad at all ^^

Anyway, Y see some illumination point troubles, like in teh face and neck. Why right side of the neck have illumination and face doesn't? For example. Be careful with this, becouse you might spoil all the illumination unity...

 

[destinator]

well, not bad at all ^^

Anyway, Y see some illumination point troubles, like in teh face and neck. Why right side of the neck have illumination and face doesn't? For example. Be careful with this, becouse you might spoil all the illumination unity...

When do we see you version Vhea <3 ?

 

[Patrik_h88]

heh thanks for comments=)

Yeh I kinda had trouble there, since im not that experienced I am unsure when and were to use it.

But this time I added it on the neck because I thought it was cool and there is normal light behind him, and the yellow light ifront of him, but when I coloured the face I got trouble since I guessed it would look wierd if I did the same near hes beard, and than I just kept it like that, but when I looking at it now I think I could have added it there too. I hope it was that u ment the problem was.
Thanks Vhea for pointing it out, its always fun to learn something new.

 

[Axysses]

wow, that's really fantastic colouring! Normally people did one where Asuma was stading in daylight, but this is completely different !!! Great job!