Ch. 404 pg 8 by K.K

[kunai-knight]

Long time no post

Enjoy! ^^

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[Toobi]

Nice work, i like it, could you please post the line art! Thanks man

 

[Jaime F.]

Looks pretty good KK, the only thing I don't like is Naruto's skin color. It's kind of weird to see the skin around Naruto's eyes darker than the rest of his face. Well, as far as the rest goes, I think you did a good job.

 

[bigtymer32]

good work and pa frog reminds me of yoda

 

[kunai-knight]

Thanks guys!

@ toobi there's no real line-art per say...its just me colorin in the stuff. whatever was black i just colored above it :|

@ Jaime F Thanks for the criticism Its pretty normal though, to see the area under the eyes being darker than the rest of the face, its a common shading technique in many anime. Like even the characters in toobi's sig have it, though to a lesser extent. I'm not sure if I used it in the right setting though. But thanks again I will work on that

@bigtymer32 Thanks! LoL Believe it or not i was thinking the same thing the moment i colored him green lol

 

[Jaime F.]

Right on Kunai-knight, I took a look at Toobi's sig as an example of eye shading. Still, if you did it to a lesser extent it would probably look better to me. I wear glasses so I'm used to seeing the opposite where the sun tans the rest of the face except the glasses area so I was kind of thinking about it in that way, of course it's the opposite of what you did. Anyways I'm glad you made a bigger version of this page available on deviant art. Despite my criticsm I still think you did a good job, and it's worth saving.