ch 420-kakashi vs pein

[e-maney]

just another day another painting

 

[PhoenixRoy]

You could clean the line more if you're going to give a big picture. And the coloring is too messy. And the text isn't doing much for me. I think you should go a more manga/comic text style.

 

[e-maney]

well- i prefer this to doing cell shading

 

[lee-nus]

try being more original, wats the point in copying amaretti with every single picture?

 

[e-maney]

wats wuth u guys and amaretti?...

 

[lee-nus]

well, looking at your pictures, its obvious you copy her.
no one likes copycat work, so... that's all there's to it.

 

[PhoenixRoy]

Your colorings are poor imitations of Amaretti's work. I'm sure that Amaretti took time to pick a light source and pick which colors would go best with the scene and character. And her use of texture is simply amazing, subtle or not.

You should use Amaretti's style as some what as a stepping stone and change into something your own. For starters, I would say you should not reference any of her work. Because if you do it from memory, it will be stylized some what.

 

[e-maney]

ok-thanks

 

[Hand Banana]

Meh, I like seeing different varations of amaretti's style as she does too. So I doubt she minds. Any hoot because how big the pic is I would have to say the lines could of been a little cleaner. But other than that keep moving forward man.

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Meh my browser isn't allowing me to edit my posts, but I meant to say he referring to amaretti

 

[- aMt -]

cool, but one isnt able to achieve Amaretti stile, I guess you are comform with this idea and try something different

 

[Lee-tyme7]

again love your coloring. Great job, man.

 

[WhatWhatinthebutt]

I don't like the gray background near the bottom... the rest of it looks hot!!!!!!

 

[e-maney]

thanks guys
but may look like amaretti's stiys becuse i was still learnig then-so i decided to try so imitations-probably dubbed to of works

 

[Black Lagoon]

Looks very good

 

[e-maney]

ok thank u