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[e-maney]

just finished this some minutes if not hours ago
fill fre to break my mind by mindless critiq or the props
thanks cheers...

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here is the line art but its too scruffy so u can edit the little details

 

[pineappleherb]

it feels rushed to me, spend some more time on something and i think you'll even be surprised

 

[DarkFlameDragon]

looks great

 

[e-maney]

thanks

 

[- aMt -]

good pic ^^

but the skin's tone on al guys are equal x]
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and the bg is so radow ^^

 

[e-maney]

thanks man.. thats what i needed

 

[Lee-tyme7]

Hey man, I love the style of your color there. How long did it take you to finish color? If it were me...hours. I like how you color the rock and mountain in the background, cool technique.
I don't feel like this was being rush at all I like this unique looks. People have their own style of coloring and that's what make it great to look at.
And doesn't she look like Hinata with those eyes, lol!

 

[WhatWhatinthebutt]

This one is better!!! Don't like the third panel though....

 

[Bohemia22]

Awesome background, characters are also cool, just some shadows could be done better.

 

[e-maney]

Hey man, I love the style of your color there. How long did it take you to finish color? If it were me...hours. I like how you color the rock and mountain in the background, cool technique.
I don't feel like this was being rush at all I like this unique looks. People have their own style of coloring and that's what make it great to look at.
And doesn't she look like Hinata with those eyes, lol!

thanks man i really apriciat it
it took me like 5hrs tring to find the right look for the background and the eyes?
i made it that way cuz deidara's eys were blue but i forgot to give her pupils
but any way......thanx

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This one is better!!! Don't like the third panel though....

i totally agree with u i dont know wat i was thinking doing like that

 

[Black Lagoon]

I like your style, great work

 

[e-maney]

thanks

 

[sam034]

I could've sworn I posted in this thread.....

I said something about detailed backgrounds. Can someone confirm this?? Or did you double post threads of the same colourization and it got deleted by the mods, e-maney?

 

[e-maney]

no i didn't

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and if i remember that would be another thread