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Noulis

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This is my first Panel ever. I hope you like it :)
Tell me the mistakes to correct them , i am on learning stage and i wanna learn as much as i can.
Cheers !!

 

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nice
 

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not's SO bad ^^
 

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Hair shade is a bit off, I might do something small on the edges of the whole head if I were you. Also keep some lineart in the eye area, it is important to have there...

But you do have clean colors and that's excellent.

Good work, Keep it...I'll be looking forward to seeing more art from you ^^
 

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Thank you all ! :)
To e-nat : i will try to fix it and post it again here.
Thanks for the tips ;)
 
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