Chapter 401, page 16, Sasuke, UPDATED!

[SageoftheSIXWays]

hhmmm...you may want to check your proportions...I don't know if anyone else sees it or not. His arms look very elongated (fancy word for stretched out too much), try to get some elbows going there.... - I think your work is just fine - what throws most people might be the fact you don't have contour lines...Try having enough, but subtle contour lines to make the figure stand out - that way, you can have enough contrast to make it stand out from the background - otherwise I think it sort of tiring to look at because it assimilates too much from the background as someone else said it. It sorta becomes organic in some sense

BTW, don't let my comments or any other comments made by others deter you from your vision, I just think some subtle contour lines can help, but your vision and your final work is what defines you in the end.

Sage of the Six Ways

Peace

 

[lee-nus]

Ahh this one looks even more spectacular. I love what you've done to the rocks, you did it better than I imagined myself.

Besides what DD is saying about the water, the only other thing that I think could be improved was Sasuke's arms, the hue kinda blends in too well with the bg imo, so it makes it kind of hard to discern the hands from the sky. So I'm thinking you could like run a darker line over the edges so that its easier to differentiate.

Oh btw I've always wondered, is that you in your display pic?

yeah, i know, but i'll leave it alone for now. i have no more time to work on it. i'll fix up random stuff after this weekend maybe, cuz im going away.
lol, yeh, thats me... ^^;

 

[Great Hyourinmaru]

Awesome!!!