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Firefox crashed, so I'm typing this over again. Bad for me
, but good for you
since the intro will be halved. The long and short of it is that I redid the format somewhat, with just minor tweaks that I hope solved the issue many had with being able to read it. As always, criticism and suggestions are welcome in posts. Ummm....what else did I say?
Oh yeah, credit goes to SleepyFans for the usual, bang-up job, blah blah blah, got my scans super early, blah blah blah, kudos for releasing it extra early and in such good quality. What else? Oh yeah, here's the review...(thought I had something else didn't ya? The 1TrueSensei likes to keep his students on their toes
)
*Edit* Ack! So many freakin' typos!!! The 1TrueSensei begs your forgiveness for his lack of attention to detail in this review. It is sadly lacking in some aspects...
Sorry for the length, but I had to put all my thoughts on the chapter down. Anyway, hope it doesn't drive away too many readers, and to those of you who did read it all the way through, thank you and I hope you enjoyed it.
Not sure if I'll do specials this week since I've already been at this for hours, but maybe I'll edit later on. Oh yeah, knew I forgot something.
Chapter Grade: B+/A- for plot and character development. Good freakin' job, Kishi.
, but good for you since the intro will be halved. The long and short of it is that I redid the format somewhat, with just minor tweaks that I hope solved the issue many had with being able to read it. As always, criticism and suggestions are welcome in posts. Ummm....what else did I say? Oh yeah, credit goes to SleepyFans for the usual, bang-up job, blah blah blah, got my scans super early, blah blah blah, kudos for releasing it extra early and in such good quality. What else? Oh yeah, here's the review...(thought I had something else didn't ya? The 1TrueSensei likes to keep his students on their toes)*Edit* Ack! So many freakin' typos!!! The 1TrueSensei begs your forgiveness for his lack of attention to detail in this review. It is sadly lacking in some aspects...
Sorry for the length, but I had to put all my thoughts on the chapter down. Anyway, hope it doesn't drive away too many readers, and to those of you who did read it all the way through, thank you and I hope you enjoyed it.
Not sure if I'll do specials this week since I've already been at this for hours, but maybe I'll edit later on. Oh yeah, knew I forgot something.
Chapter Grade: B+/A- for plot and character development. Good freakin' job, Kishi.
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