very nice! seriously, your drawing has gotten way better since the first ones i saw you post! haha, i could never draw like this! sasuke's face looks a little bit... orch...ish... xDxD
oh, and maybe his left leg is a little too short...? but the rest is great! if you dealt with those minor details and gave me a biiiig version with no text i'd easily color it for you...
It's just ... great ^^ I actually like it very much, but one think stroke me: thelittle snake from big Oro snake. It's queite funny for me, but probably its only me hyhy