Cover 357 Painting Style !'

[sarutobikun]

Hey Yo !

here is my panel for the chapter 357 !
I did it the faster i can as always with a painting style this style

I definitely need a table to improve -__________-".

 

[kyubisharingan]

nice, but the color seem kinda....bleh

 

[yeste]

nice, but the color seem kinda....bleh

That's just his style...

Looks good!

 

[MasterX]

nice but
maybe too fast...

 

[sarutobikun]

Add a version with warm colors

 

[kyubisharingan]

yes, i like the warmer colors^^

 

[kadoman]

Mmm...I think for the short amount of time you got this out, it's good, but it definitely needs longer treatment, sorry! But why the hurry anyway? The Naruto sign isn't done, and the background has very little depth. Deidi's face looks pretty good, but his hair needs work. I would love to see what this would be like if you spent a longer time on it, as it has potential to look really awesome.

 

[MasterX]

I prefer the new version, and I totaly agree with Kadoman ^^

 

[kyubisharingan]

yes i also agree with kado. but, did you really go fast on this? or are you just saying that becuase your not satisfied with the end result?

 

[sarutobikun]

"Do it fast"

I mean like 1 hour or 2,

I stark working 3 minutes after the RAW HQ by the chineses.
That's just it ;>

 

[kadoman]

Heh...I was gonna say, KS, the RAW's only been out about 3 hours so he's obviously done it in a very fast time frame!

But you know...Sarutokikun, KS has a point; I wonder how satisfied you can be with something so quickly released? Wouldn't you like to spend more time improving on it so that the finished result better represents your true potential? I'm just curious...

 

[sarutobikun]

So,i swear that my next colo will be more worked than the others,i will spend like 5 hours ou 6 hours

About somethings,
I'm a kind of great nooB in background like i haven't the skill and don't know how to do ^^.
I don't know how to make the naruto logo :'(
I don't know how to clean

You can now call me a noob

 

[kadoman]

Well, you sure don't colour like a noob! You're obviously talented! I'm sorry if I came across the wrong way; I don't want to make you feel bad; I just think it's obvious that this could be an awesome colouring by anyone's standards if only it wasn't released in like, 2 hours flat! And you say you haven't got the skill in some areas, but I think you might underestimate yourself, because, hey, if you can produce this quality in a fast time frame, mate, just imagine what you could produce with more time!

But I'll leave you alone now! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work!

 

[sarutobikun]

I'm working on the double spread,i will keep in minds all of your advices

The night may be long(yes in france it's the evening :O)

 

[bax]

I like the second one