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its very nice i think... but the skin is like daylight bright, while their clothes are really dark. in that sense its not really coherent, but i think you could work it out. ^^
Its beautiful!! <3 the only problem is the skin tone doesn't match the feel of the BG. Since the BG is so blue, maybe you could add a tint of blue on their skin. Same goes to the village as well. Other than that, it looks pretty! <3
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its very nice i think... but the skin is like daylight bright, while their clothes are really dark. in that sense its not really coherent, but i think you could work it out. ^^
 

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Awesome ^^
 

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Nice JMC, good job coloring this.
 

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very good ;D
i like the BG a lot :3
 

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pues para estar aprendiendo me parece que esta muuuy bien
de hecho hasta le coloriaste el BG con gran detalle, me gusta bastante :D
 

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Its beautiful!! <3 the only problem is the skin tone doesn't match the feel of the BG. Since the BG is so blue, maybe you could add a tint of blue on their skin. Same goes to the village as well. Other than that, it looks pretty! <3
 

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nice!??
jeje bueno pero pusiste mucha oscuridad!
je
 

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Great work on background, it awesome. Overall, I like the cover. :D
 
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