Day and Night

[Hand Banana]

Right now this is the lineart phase as I'm still teaching myself cel-shading on CS3. This one took me well over 4 hours of sketching and doing the lineart total. But I have to say I'm quite pleased. So tell me what you think. And btw their eyes are closed.

http://hand-banana.deviantart.com/art/Day-and-Night-122426511

 

[- aMt -]

nots bad

 

[lee-nus]

i'll tell u wat i think, being:
the lines are too thick, and have the same thickness all over, making it look flat, and not too interesting. if you are pleased, thats all good, but its not something i would use... ^^;
i would suggest you try to make the lines thinner and more dynamic, meaning not the same thickness all over.

peace!

 

[pineappleherb]

FOUR hours? dude, really? im sorry to hear that

 

[tEchIe]

FOUR hours? dude, really? im sorry to hear that

actually 4 hours for a first timer is just about right...

Right now this is the lineart phase as I'm still teaching myself cel-shading on CS3. This one took me well over 4 hours of sketching and doing the lineart total. But I have to say I'm quite pleased. So tell me what you think. And btw their eyes are closed.

http://hand-banana.deviantart.com/art/Day-and-Night-122426511

by CS3 you mean Illustrator or Photoshop ?
regardless you should try and upgrade to CS4...

as for the actual lines, it's okish , which is good for a start...