DD's Team Sasuke by Lee-nus <3

[lee-nus]

hope you werent expecting to see all four of them. well, i guess that's what the title implies, but i got so sick of my shitty abilities and i couldnt get it where i wanted, so i excluded suigetsu, karin and juugo... so, only sasuke for now. hope you wont hate me for that... T_T

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/53196587/

anyways, comments and crit welcome.

cheers!

 

[bax]

You call that shitty? Noooooeeesss !!!!!
(Then my abilities are like...... )


It is great

 

[kunai-knight]

Yeah its actually pretty good Probably the only thing you can try is to make more blue light 'reflections' on the walls and on sasuke's tummy as it is pretty dark in there....but other than that its all good! stop beating yourself up!

 

[qwan3356]

That looks awesome!
my coloring skills are like a toddler playing with a crayon.
Great Job. can't wait til ya do the rest of them.

 

[lee-nus]

Yeah its actually pretty good Probably the only thing you can try is to make more blue light 'reflections' on the walls and on sasuke's tummy as it is pretty dark in there....but other than that its all good! stop beating yourself up!

ah, maybe you saw the old version then? i re-submitted it shortly afterwards, after having added some more blue light to several parts of the picture. i might change it again later on, but it will have to look like this for a while now. time's up! ^^ anyway, i hope you like it better now at least.

@qwan: crayons are charming, arent they? become a skilled crayon painter, wont ya! its original! xDDD

@bax: you'd rock my socks if you only tried!

 

[kadoman]

Good one Lee-nus. I really love the extra details you've given it. I had to laugh though. The title is Team Sasuke! and then you click on it and there's...Sasuke. By himself. That's team Sasuke all right. He wishes! Made me think of that time when they were first put in their 3 man cells and he says that 3 is too many. Looks like you granted his wish there!

 

[lee-nus]

Good one Lee-nus. I really love the extra details you've given it. I had to laugh though. The title is Team Sasuke! and then you click on it and there's...Sasuke. By himself. That's team Sasuke all right. He wishes! Made me think of that time when they were first put in their 3 man cells and he says that 3 is too many. Looks like you granted his wish there!

lol, my thoughts exactly! i just didnt want to warp the title of dd's lineart too much, i had no idea what else to call it and any more describing title would have been too long i figured! im glad you like it though... ^^

 

[*Mel*]

o.O You are pretty good at colouring ^^ (I wish I could colour like you =/)
Anyway as I said there the BG is pretty good too =D

 

[kunai-knight]

ahhh now thats the stuff it does look more realistic now! The walls look slightly concave-ish but! it creates a good effect! good job lee-nus!

 

[juUnior]

hahaha good one, indeed xD

 

[lee-nus]

thanks ppl, although i've spotted a number of things i need to improve or change. i'll work more on it as soon as i can... ^^

 

[destinator]

You have gotten sooo good. I love it ...

 

[lee-nus]

thanks des, i've already started hating it though! it doesnt do dd's lineart anywhere near justice! T_T

 

[kadoman]

thanks des, i've already started hating it though! it doesnt do dd's lineart anywhere near justice! T_T

But why are you starting to hate it? However, I do know what you mean...it's a terrible feeling! I often work on one of my photographs and then after a while, the more I look at it, the more flaws I start seeing and then I start to hate it. Argh! But please don't hate this one of yours! It doesn't deserve it!

 

[lee-nus]

lol, it does! i should give it a new background at least! T_T