Death is my Master

[CallMeZionn]

hmm... I know this needs quite a bit of work, but I was wondering if you could give me a few honest comments on what is good and what is bad, feel free to say anything you want. Thx.

BTW, here is a link for my storyline. http://mangahelpers.com/forums/showthread.php?t=45061

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[RalphSeggaSama]

looks good.. thats Rai right?

 

[CallMeZionn]

Yah, thats him, I'm planning on doing a picture of Death soon.

 

[RalphSeggaSama]

cool.. cant wait to see