Deidara [357]

[§madara§]

 

[abcdefghijkL0L]

The coloring is all right, but the glow effect is just

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[§madara§]

I tried another style

 

[Y-on]

I like the coloring, but as stated by abc, the background lighting just kills it for me, the lineart is also choppy and strangely proportioned is some places. v.v

 

[§madara§]

the lineart, I do not know. Background, I am sorry, but I liked the lighting, vote?

 

[Jaime F.]

Hello Madara, I think this is one of your better colorings, for sure. I like the light in the background, but I think it's just a little bit to bright. Perhaps if you compromised with the people who look at your colorings, and turned the lighting down a little bit, it would look a lot better. Other than that, all the colors you used look correct, are in good taste. I did notice, that some splotches of black, got into the white border parts of the red clouds, on Deidara's Akatsuki cloak, but that could be easily fixed if you wanted to. I also noticed, that you used a dark shade of purple for the clouds, instead of red. It's not really the correct color, but it does work just as well, so that's ok. Well anyways, just to let you know where I'm coming from, I was always kind of a perfectionist, when it came to my art, so I notice a lot of the small things that could make someone's art appear just a little bit better. Well I hope you don't mind my criticsms that much Madara. I actually do think this is one your best colorings so far, so it does seem like you're improving, and that's a good thing. By the way, I did notice that you've been coloring a lot more lately, so I admire your determination to improve, keep it up.

 

[§madara§]

Jaime, if one is saying these things, would wickedness. Why the creator, not understand the error. And therefore has no chance of improvement.