Deidara chapter 357

[blaarg8891]

I love this picture of Deidara so I did the lines and then colored it. Personally I think its my best color yet. I am open to all critiques and if you want the line art you can find it on my Deviant Art

DEIDARA!!!!
http://blaarg8891.deviantart.com/art/Deidara-Color-123605583

 

[Y-on]

Your color palette is a little dull, and since there's such little lighting I don't think that he needs a reflective shine on his right cheek, needless to say a complete white one, as white usually only appears wherever the object takes the light straight on from, and your light source seems to be coming from the opposite side of the shine. Lines a little thick for my taste, and the black of them is awkward, sometimes subtly changing the colors makes a large difference.

 

[lee-nus]

tsuny pretty much said it all. what you need is a more contrastive and interesting palette btw!

 

[tEchIe]

it's nice, simple and clean.
but Tsuny and lee-nus do have a point about it being a bit too bland...

 

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