Despotize Ch3 pages, c&c please

[ShinuZERO]

Alright, here it is, chapter 3 so far. Please comment and crit!

 

[LokoTrashman]

wow ...the story is good ...somehow familliar but good ... there may have beem some other mangas with the same (or at least related) subject ... anyways dunno what to say ... you drawing technique it's not quite manga ... I mean i rather toonami(comics) style ... maybe you should try to remake the manga using manga style ... but good job ..i like the title though ..cool font

 

[ShinuZERO]

wow ...the story is good ...somehow familliar but good ... there may have beem some other mangas with the same (or at least related) subject ... anyways dunno what to say ... you drawing technique it's not quite manga ... I mean i rather toonami(comics) style ... maybe you should try to remake the manga using manga style ... but good job ..i like the title though ..cool font

Thanks, but I don't want to change my art style. I don't believe in the separation of manga and american comics, to me they're all COMICS. It doesn't matter where they come from, or who made them, if it's a good story I'll read it. I don't want to put a label on my artwork. I'll do comics my way, and not conform to some standard or boundaries set by a certain art style. I want to be myself in my art. If you don't like it, I'm sorry.

With that said, I'd still like opinions on how to improve as an artist and at making pages. Saying things like "change your art style" aren't very helpful and are more of a personal preference. I need advice in general to help me further my study of sequential art.

2 new pages:

if you want to read the archives(chapter 1 and 2) you can read them at http://www.despotize.tk

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new page!

I got another one to add tomorrow

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heres the new page I promised!

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no new pages but a few fillers. I just got my desk from the move so I'll be cranking out pages in no time!

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Chapter 4 complete!