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[erebea]

This is from Glass Mask and it's a scene at the very beginning of a play when a character is being introduced. I've attempted to translate it, but want to make sure it's correct.

This is my translation:

Over there…. / The mere appearance of a lone woman in the valley of the red plums created a mysterious atmosphere.

(Her presence) gave birth to a stage that transcended even time and space.

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[Shiratori99]

Re: [Help] Translation check for 2 textboxes

There...

The mere appearance of a lone "woman" transformed the valley of plums into a wondrous space.

This is where a stage/scene was born which transcends time and space.