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I think the translator translates badly XD , you do not understand what I mean XD .Again it's really not that fast at all especially there still places we haven't come to or journey around like for example, there still more members of the Galactic Overload Six that haven't been seen yet, 6 more galaxies than just Sakura Cosmos as mention by Rebecca, What is Mother's objective and mystery concerning about her, Ziggy's past as well for 4 Star Shines, what outside more than just around Mother's perspective, etc.. It's really not the end of the series heading this direction as there is many planning and world-building since space is kinda an 'Infinite' spectrum which anything is possible for the series to continue going for awhile on and to connect the dots for later without it feeling too big or out of place as it won't be.
They aren't really main defects and again your expecting too much in early chapters to think it should be heavy stuff of time consuming when it shouldn't be in exploring or journeying through the place. Series got planning to stretching for many volumes, so don't think it's hitting an too fast pace or not world-building enough as it's in an middle ground of not going too fast, but not too slow. It be boring on spending too much on same planet for long as it won't feel like an space adventure if just about one planet for the next 20+ chapters or more. Not saying it won't be like that, but we shouldn't expect deep surge of plot heaviness on staying just yet when it still got an lot of ideas and planning far ahead on how it can go and transitions as well.
Of course we are far from the end this is not the problem, we will have all the time in the world to discover the comos, mother etc.
But at the present time I think we're going too fast, no matter how EZ is 30 volumes, 40-50-60 volumes.
We have started an adventure, an odyssey of space but also visited the planet.
Not necessarily spent 50 chapter above but a minimum syndical is required but I think it will happen a day at least for a big one arc .
On Grand Bell, the park is the whole planet and in view of the context it is normal to have not seen more, but we will have avaoir small box or we see Rebecca visited the park.
Nouma we saw that a city, as normal in the context of history.
Blue Garden we saw that the city for the moment, but I would like to see something else, it is on that we will see the house of Rebecca before they leave for good but it will have shown other things on the planet.
Guilst the city, we always come back to him who posed XD problem. Even by setting the context, they found the base of the mercenaries too easily, we did not see them visited the city.
And even mashima used the time to give an "" "excuse" "not to hang on this planet.There again, it will have lengthened the party with rebecca and for shiki to visit the city to find the base , questioned people and everything.
They find the base but the tower of illegal is not in this city as an example and the part in the tower you can not say that it was well done transition level, since there is none:
- shiki lands in towers we see how he came in, how he found direct rebecca, how jin and co land so fast in the room and the same for Wise and co.
Some said to laugh that the room where it is rebecca actually it just at the entrance of the tower, saw how everyone arrives so quickly.
So there it loses all the aspect "" the Tower "", in the principle of mounted the floor, to make several room, confronted enemies to find what one seeks.
Guilst must have done at least double in chapter.
Digitalis, 2 village there like no transition, the villages are stuck to others, we lose the aspect of open world for once, we could see them typed the mob on 2-3 boxes.
Mildian the palace, there it is logical, they are just for Xio mei, but there in this account it will be necessary to learn more about the history of this planet.
To do it like in OP, in Alabasta, wano, dressrosa, they do not visit all the island, but the 2/4, 3/4 and it makes good so EZ should do the same + after things can happen in the Space visited a moon, stopped at a station / bar that kind of thing.
In short, that's why I think it's going too fast, after that it's my feeling, so I would like mashima to correct that.
In fact you will have to do some kind of data book on the planet to learn more about this one, what kind of planet it is, how it is directed etc.
In a future bow, I would like the group to be really separated in sum, shiki is in the city A of the planet and rebecca is in the city C but at the other end of the planet.

