Misc Attempt First Attempt

[yell_o_snail]

Hi attached is my first attempt of editing a manga page. Please comment and give some feedback.

Thank you

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[DelGrecco]

It may just be my browser, but I'm only seeing image tags instead of your pages. You may want to try linking them again. Good luck!

 

[thornofcarrion]

The original spoiler has nothing to show. Please correct it.

 

[yell_o_snail]

Thank you both for replying

That strange that it doesn't appear on your screens as it shows up on my browser (safari) without any problems. Anyway I've re-linked the images so hope it shows up on your browsers.

 

[Teaparty]

It looks pretty good.

On the right side, instead of repeatedly mouse-clicking with the clone, click and drag the mouse to make it smoother. Right now it looks like it has ripples.

 

[Mushashi]

^ thats the only thing for a first time its better then mine was.