Misc Attempt First clean...

[danil14]

RAW:

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Cleaned:

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Rate my clean

 

[DelGrecco]

This looks like a great first attempt, you've cleaned it up very nicely. Two things jump out at me during a quick look over them. First, the panel with the person on the field looks kind of blurry, at least the grass does. I don't know if this is a result of denoising the image, but it did make me wonder.

Second is that there are a couple of spots on each page that you should be able to take care of with the quick application of a paint brush tool. They are minor spots, but they take away from the other efforts you've made.

So this is a great first showing. Now comes the fun part, are you going to try to re-draw the page with the fight taking place?

Good luck with your future efforts!

 

[progste]

I think the first is a bit overfiltered and you forgot to burn the blacks here and there but it's still an impressive resul for a first try =D
the second seems good

 

[L0ki]

6/10 (on a MQ scale)

 

[AnkorSVK]

I think the first is a bit overfiltered and you forgot to burn the blacks here and there but it's still an impressive resul for a first try =D
the second seems good

I the same oppinon first too much blur/denoise and unburned blacks
Second looks a lot better and would be nice if you would redraw it