first try. Naruto

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Seems good!!!:p
Good job!!!:amuse
 

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It needs more shades, a gradient alone won't just do, really get in there with the pen tool (or if you have a tablet) and add more tones for depth. Remember to keep in mind your light source, yours is a bit too bright to have such dark areas in the piece.
 

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really nice dude :D in my fist time coloring was terrible, but you but you did very well!!
I´m agree with tsuny, you only can become a master with the practice :D keep up the good work!
 
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i think it needs more contrast,because some parts should be darker
anyway nice first try!:thumbs
 

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dont like =/
 
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