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INDEX:
Giant Spider Summon
Doki Summon (The Three summons Tayuya used against Shikamaru)
Kuchiyose no Jutsu
Kugutsu (Puppet techniques)
Medical Ninjutsu
Ningu (Ninja tools)
Kuchiyose: Kirikiri Mai (Temari's summon)
Butterfly Bombardment (Chouji's pill techniques)
Fuuinjutsu
Konoha Whirlwind & Adamantium Prison Wall (Sarutobi)
Kidoumaru's Spider Techniques 1
Kidoumaru's Spider Techniques 2
[3c]Merged threads and added index[/3c]
Okay, draft of 84-85 done...
Although I think it's very odd putting these three characters together
If Konohamaru got eaten by the spider and vanished from the series then I would be a very happy chappy
(sorry to Konohamaru fans)
Proofreading お願い
Thanx!
_________________________________________________
Page 84-85 Giant spider etc
Page 84
Writing down right side:
巨大蜘蛛
Giant spider
Heading on right side:
虎視眈々と獲物を狙う
Patiently lying in wait for its prey
魔巣に棲ましい禍々しき巨影！！
A giant ominous shadow in an evil web!!
Top paragraph:
音の忍・鬼童丸が口寄せする巨大な蜘蛛で、木々の枝を利して壮大な巣を作り、地上の敵をつけ狙う。鬼童丸の命により瞬時に腹か卵のうを産み、卵のうからかえった数多の子蜘蛛もまた、統一された意思の下、敵に攻撃を仕掛ける・・・。
The giant spider summoned by the Sound shinobi, Kidōmaru. It makes a grand web up in the trees and stalks its prey on the ground. At a word from Kidōmaru it releases egg sacs from its belly, and the countless baby spiders which spring from the egg sacs attack the enemy as one
Bottom paragraph:
チャクラの糸を操る子蜘蛛は、直接敵を攻撃するだけでなく、時には糸で敵を拘束するなど、状況に応じた様々な攻撃パターンを持ち、圧倒的な数で敵を追いつめる。そして膨大な数の子蜘蛛の攻撃に気を取られた相手は、鬼童丸の攻撃を為す術もなく受けることになる。
The baby spiders use webs made from chakra and do not only directly attack the enemy. They have various attack patterns for different situations, overwhelming their foe with their numbers and sometimes using their webs to bind them. And while the enemy is distracted by the massed assault of the baby spiders, they are helpless to fend off Kidōmarus attacks.
Picture captions:
↑巨大蜘蛛が生み出す巨大な卵のう。中には、夥しい数の子蜘蛛が宿っている。
The giant spiders massive egg sac, containing innumerable baby spiders.
←上空から一斉に襲いくる無数の子蜘蛛。全てを防ぎきることなどできはしない・・・。
Countless baby spiders attack from the sky at once. There is no way to block them all
Page 85
Genyuumaru heading:
その身を大蛇丸に奉じ一族の桎梏を解き放つ
He lays down his body to break the chains of his clan
Text over body:
もう一匹いたのかよ・・・
There was one left, huh
Genyuumaru paragraph:
急遽必要となった大蛇丸の新たなる「器」。邪穴に捕らわれし者同士で行われた、その凄惨なる「器」選びの一戦で勝ち名乗りをあげたのがこの幻幽丸だ。だが、卓越した戦闘力を持つがゆえにその肉体は大蛇丸に奪われることに。今はただ、その残留思念が大蛇丸の体内に残るだけだ。
Orochimarus urgently needed new vessel. A terrible battle was held between prisoners in a pit to select a vessel, and the winner was Genyuumaru. However, because of this exception fighting ability, his body was taken over by Orochimaru. A residual yearning within Orochimarus body is all that remains of Genyuumaru.
Genyuumaru info box:
忍者登録番号 －
Ninja number
誕生日 ７月２７日 （１７歳・しし座）
Birthday 27th of July (Age 17 || Leo)
身長 １７２ｃｍ 体重 ５７．３ｋｇ 血液型 B型
Height 172cm Weight 57.3kg Blood type B
性格 強気、自信家
Character Agressive, confident
Genyuumaru picture, speech:
・・・お前の実験の為に捕えられたオレの一族を
...My whole clan locked up for your experiments
解放してくれ・・・
Let them go
Genyuumaru picture, caption:
↑激しき死闘に勝ち残り意気あがる幻幽丸であったが、大蛇丸の前では戦意を喪失・・・。一族の解放だけを願い、その身を捧げた。
↑Genyuumarus triumph after overcoming the desperate struggle for survival evaporates in the face of Orochimaru He pleaded for his clans release and gave up his body.
Konohamaru heading:
いつの日か隆々たる大樹へ ｜｜ 三代目の血を継ぎし若葉！！
The young leaf, descended from Sandaime, who will one day grow into a sturdy tree!
Text over konohamaru:
・・・ジジィ・・・
Gramps
Konohamaru paragraph:
歴代最強の火影と謳われた、三代目の血を継ぐ木ノ葉丸。木ノ葉崩しにより敬愛する祖父を失い、その心は悲しみに覆われる。だが必ずや里を守る大樹に成長するであろう。果てぬ目標の祖父を目指して・・・！！
Konohamaru, descended from Sandaime, who was praised as historys strongest Hokage. Konohamarus was shrouded in sadness after losing his beloved grandfather in the Downfall of Konoha. However, he will mature into a great tree to protect his village. Following in his grandfathers footsteps !!
Konohamaru info box:
忍者登録番号 －
Ninja number
誕生日 １２月３０日 （９歳・やぎ座）
Birthday 30th of December (Age 9 || Capricorn)
身長 １３０．６ｃｍ 体重 ２９．５ｋｇ 血液型 B型
Height 130.6cm Weight 29.5kg Blood type B
性格 せっかち、負けず嫌い
Character Hotheaded and hates losing
好きな食べ物 ラーメン、チョコバナナ
Favourite foods Ramen, chocolate bananas
嫌いな食べ物 たまねぎ
Hated foods Onion
得意な術 隠れ蓑の術、おいろけの術
Speciality Jutsu Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak of Invisibility) and Oiroke no Jutsu (Ninja Centrefold)
戦ってみたい相手 うずまきナルト
Desired opponent Uzumaki Naruto
Konohamaru picture, caption: (speech is sob sob)
↑幼い心には激しすぎる現実。祖父との思い出は木ノ葉丸の温もり。
Reality too harsh for a young heart. Konohamarus memories of his grandfather warm him.
Giant Spider Summon
Doki Summon (The Three summons Tayuya used against Shikamaru)
Kuchiyose no Jutsu
Kugutsu (Puppet techniques)
Medical Ninjutsu
Ningu (Ninja tools)
Kuchiyose: Kirikiri Mai (Temari's summon)
Butterfly Bombardment (Chouji's pill techniques)
Fuuinjutsu
Konoha Whirlwind & Adamantium Prison Wall (Sarutobi)
Kidoumaru's Spider Techniques 1
Kidoumaru's Spider Techniques 2
[3c]Merged threads and added index[/3c]
Okay, draft of 84-85 done...
Although I think it's very odd putting these three characters together
If Konohamaru got eaten by the spider and vanished from the series then I would be a very happy chappy
(sorry to Konohamaru fans)Proofreading お願い
Thanx!
_________________________________________________
Page 84-85 Giant spider etc
Page 84
Writing down right side:
巨大蜘蛛
Giant spider
Heading on right side:
虎視眈々と獲物を狙う
Patiently lying in wait for its prey
魔巣に棲ましい禍々しき巨影！！
A giant ominous shadow in an evil web!!
Top paragraph:
音の忍・鬼童丸が口寄せする巨大な蜘蛛で、木々の枝を利して壮大な巣を作り、地上の敵をつけ狙う。鬼童丸の命により瞬時に腹か卵のうを産み、卵のうからかえった数多の子蜘蛛もまた、統一された意思の下、敵に攻撃を仕掛ける・・・。
The giant spider summoned by the Sound shinobi, Kidōmaru. It makes a grand web up in the trees and stalks its prey on the ground. At a word from Kidōmaru it releases egg sacs from its belly, and the countless baby spiders which spring from the egg sacs attack the enemy as one
Bottom paragraph:
チャクラの糸を操る子蜘蛛は、直接敵を攻撃するだけでなく、時には糸で敵を拘束するなど、状況に応じた様々な攻撃パターンを持ち、圧倒的な数で敵を追いつめる。そして膨大な数の子蜘蛛の攻撃に気を取られた相手は、鬼童丸の攻撃を為す術もなく受けることになる。
The baby spiders use webs made from chakra and do not only directly attack the enemy. They have various attack patterns for different situations, overwhelming their foe with their numbers and sometimes using their webs to bind them. And while the enemy is distracted by the massed assault of the baby spiders, they are helpless to fend off Kidōmarus attacks.
Picture captions:
↑巨大蜘蛛が生み出す巨大な卵のう。中には、夥しい数の子蜘蛛が宿っている。
The giant spiders massive egg sac, containing innumerable baby spiders.
←上空から一斉に襲いくる無数の子蜘蛛。全てを防ぎきることなどできはしない・・・。
Countless baby spiders attack from the sky at once. There is no way to block them all
Page 85
Genyuumaru heading:
その身を大蛇丸に奉じ一族の桎梏を解き放つ
He lays down his body to break the chains of his clan
Text over body:
もう一匹いたのかよ・・・
There was one left, huh
Genyuumaru paragraph:
急遽必要となった大蛇丸の新たなる「器」。邪穴に捕らわれし者同士で行われた、その凄惨なる「器」選びの一戦で勝ち名乗りをあげたのがこの幻幽丸だ。だが、卓越した戦闘力を持つがゆえにその肉体は大蛇丸に奪われることに。今はただ、その残留思念が大蛇丸の体内に残るだけだ。
Orochimarus urgently needed new vessel. A terrible battle was held between prisoners in a pit to select a vessel, and the winner was Genyuumaru. However, because of this exception fighting ability, his body was taken over by Orochimaru. A residual yearning within Orochimarus body is all that remains of Genyuumaru.
Genyuumaru info box:
忍者登録番号 －
Ninja number
誕生日 ７月２７日 （１７歳・しし座）
Birthday 27th of July (Age 17 || Leo)
身長 １７２ｃｍ 体重 ５７．３ｋｇ 血液型 B型
Height 172cm Weight 57.3kg Blood type B
性格 強気、自信家
Character Agressive, confident
Genyuumaru picture, speech:
・・・お前の実験の為に捕えられたオレの一族を
...My whole clan locked up for your experiments
解放してくれ・・・
Let them go
Genyuumaru picture, caption:
↑激しき死闘に勝ち残り意気あがる幻幽丸であったが、大蛇丸の前では戦意を喪失・・・。一族の解放だけを願い、その身を捧げた。
↑Genyuumarus triumph after overcoming the desperate struggle for survival evaporates in the face of Orochimaru He pleaded for his clans release and gave up his body.
Konohamaru heading:
いつの日か隆々たる大樹へ ｜｜ 三代目の血を継ぎし若葉！！
The young leaf, descended from Sandaime, who will one day grow into a sturdy tree!
Text over konohamaru:
・・・ジジィ・・・
Gramps
Konohamaru paragraph:
歴代最強の火影と謳われた、三代目の血を継ぐ木ノ葉丸。木ノ葉崩しにより敬愛する祖父を失い、その心は悲しみに覆われる。だが必ずや里を守る大樹に成長するであろう。果てぬ目標の祖父を目指して・・・！！
Konohamaru, descended from Sandaime, who was praised as historys strongest Hokage. Konohamarus was shrouded in sadness after losing his beloved grandfather in the Downfall of Konoha. However, he will mature into a great tree to protect his village. Following in his grandfathers footsteps !!
Konohamaru info box:
忍者登録番号 －
Ninja number
誕生日 １２月３０日 （９歳・やぎ座）
Birthday 30th of December (Age 9 || Capricorn)
身長 １３０．６ｃｍ 体重 ２９．５ｋｇ 血液型 B型
Height 130.6cm Weight 29.5kg Blood type B
性格 せっかち、負けず嫌い
Character Hotheaded and hates losing
好きな食べ物 ラーメン、チョコバナナ
Favourite foods Ramen, chocolate bananas
嫌いな食べ物 たまねぎ
Hated foods Onion
得意な術 隠れ蓑の術、おいろけの術
Speciality Jutsu Kakuremino no Jutsu (Cloak of Invisibility) and Oiroke no Jutsu (Ninja Centrefold)
戦ってみたい相手 うずまきナルト
Desired opponent Uzumaki Naruto
Konohamaru picture, caption: (speech is sob sob)
↑幼い心には激しすぎる現実。祖父との思い出は木ノ葉丸の温もり。
Reality too harsh for a young heart. Konohamarus memories of his grandfather warm him.
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