Well it is dmc-br's lines, so it's going to look very similar anyways. Sorry Lee_nus, I usually agree with your assesment of other people's art, but not this time. Although Silente took inspiration from dmc-br's/Orochimaru's coloring, to me it doesn't look like an identical copy of it. Silente even added a shadow behind Gaara's eye, which isn't in dmc-br's version. I also noticed that the curved line that is inbetween Gaara's left eye, and nose on your version, was made into a shadow on Orochimaru's version. The 2 are similar, but they do have their small differences. If you carefully compare them side by side you can see them. Over all I'd say this coloring is atleast decent, if not semi-close to good.