Hinata

[nat]

Hello awesome ones. How are doing you today?

I have a small fanart here, it's still in lineart phase. But I thought about uploading it ...

Spoiler: first + edits

second Edit

third Edit

4th edit, smaller Hinata to fit background

Some things are iffy, but I will change them in the coloring process..Don't hesitate to criticize...Since I post first to get feedback

 

[Jaime F.]

Well, as you know, I play music, and it's been years since I've seriously done anything like this. Looking at this now, a couple suggestions come to mind. 1, is to fix up the line art for her nose. The line art is a little bit jagged near the mid section of her nose. The next thing I'll suggest, and I feel a little odd suggesting it, but I'll do it anyways, is to reshape her chest. As it is right now, to put it simply, her jacket looks a little bit to tight. Besides, I'm sure the male fans would appreciate it more, if you reshaped her chest in a more womanly way.

Well as for now, I don't see anything obvious that needs to be changed. If I think of anything worth mentioning though, I'll let you know. I guess more detail never hurts. Well, like always, keep up the good work Nat, and thank you for sharing your art with us.

 

[Masaki195]

Nice and simple. The background could have a little more detail, but Masashi never really puts much in his backgrounds either.(look at Orochimaru's hideout, xD)

Very well done, Hinata is such a cutie.

 

[nat]

Aha!! Thanks for the tips Masaki and Jaime...

Those will definitely be changed for the colors, nose, chest and background...
Gotta make the final pic perfect, that's why I need feedback. And having such detailed criticism is amazing

 

[Googlez_kun]

Nice and simple. The background could have a little more detail, but Masashi never really puts much in his backgrounds either.(look at Orochimaru's hideout, xD)

Very well done, Hinata is such a cutie.

*AHEM*


very well done nat! i like what you did!

the only thing i could say something about is the background...
not that it has not so many details or something like this,what really bothers me is that she looks so huge through the bg*looks at the wondow*

looking foorward to the coloring!

 

[nat]

She's a monster!!!!!!!!! Or the camera lens was too close...

But you're right> Bigger scale background it is...
My favorite panel in details was when Konoha went poof! :

 

[Googlez_kun]

i hope she'll shrink a bit

that was a panel full of awesomeness!

i've a few questions,hope you don't mind:how do you put in the screentones?by hand?with a computer program?and which?

 

[nat]

photoshop > you make another layer and fully paint it white then go to filters> sketch>halftone

That's it...

I made some tuneups...Still Need to make more..

 

[alpvonkri]

Good job!!!
I like it!!!
5 Stars!!!

 

[nat]

Thank you alpvonkri!!! Glad you like it

 

[The Flash]

Natalie

Hello awesome ones. How are doing you today?

I'm pretty good. How are you?

As for your Art work
"That's hot" - Paris

But in all seriousness. I liked the edited version, I see you took some advice from Jaime. But I liked both. Your work is simply put, amazing and breath taking. Keep up the spectacular work my dear friend

 

[ksfst]

nat, I see what you did there in the edited version, hmmm boobs *__*

But to be honestly, I prefer the first, this bigger boobs make her seem fat and take away her charm, IMO.
Also, better than an Icha-Icha poster would be a Naruto picture, she's a stalker after all hahahaha
Great fanart looking forward to see it colored.

 

[nat]

Aha!...New crits....Thanks ksfst

Maybe I'll make a middle ground between Tsuande wannabe and Sakura...This way, it'll make Hinata look thinner while having her boobs true to the original ...

But putting Naruto poster would be too much of a cliche', imo. We'll see I might put him there to attract the NaruHina fans


Mark...So you think second version is ok and not too fat? Mmmm, it's kinda confusing Though last cover made her look *fat*...
I saw the awesome Canadian thread got close

 

[The Flash]

Natalie

Mark...So you think second version is ok and not too fat? Mmmm, it's kinda confusing Though last cover made her look *fat*...
I saw the awesome Canadian thread got close

I like the body proportions in the first one. Jaime said the chest size needs to be bigger *not that Hinata fans are arguing* Somewhere between the first and second would be better

[bold]I think Kishimoto wants to make Hinata more of a bust for Naruto ha! . Yes, I know your not a naruhina fan. Just thought I tease you

p.s - Canadian thread closed We should make a fan club for Canadians? haha

 

[- aMt -]

love it!

 

[nat]

I tried to make a third version just to see which one is better.
I think the third looks more normal, I might have to shrink Hinata more to make her fit with the background..

 

[The Flash]

^
can't wait!

 

[ksfst]

Yeah, the third is just great, Hinata just need some shrinking, just a little.

btw Nat, I would really love to see more "passionate" fan arts of Naruto from you, if you know what I mean...
(NaruSaku, NaruHina, and gosh, some Anko with anyone FTW)

 

[Orochimaru]

nice nat

 

[killbill]

that's really nice...i really like it..