Hyuuga Neji viewing the moon <3

[lee-nus]

allrightey folk, time to publish another one!
yet again, cred to dynamic dragon for the lineart!

my idea for this image can be found on the very same link. i think it turned out allright, since im not used to that sort of lighting and colors like the ones used. in other words, this was my first night-time coloring.
since im using a laptop with a currently dead mouse, im using touch pad which can be a pain in the ass at time. but as i said, i reckon its an okay job...

feel free to comment on it!

http://www.deviantart.com/view/37337073/

 

[Sasuke Uchihas Avenger]

I think it came out just fine. Its a wonderful piece of work! Great job!

 

[e-s-g]

That looks nice, man! It has some very good atmosphere.
Good job, I like it!

 

[lee-nus]

I think it came out just fine. Its a wonderful piece of work! Great job!

awww, that's nice of you! ^^ thanks lots![br]Posted on: August 02, 2006, 05:59:17 PM_________________________________________________

That looks nice, man! It has some very good atmosphere.
Good job, I like it!

another nice comment! though i've recieved a few of those from you in the past too... no less nice because of that, though!

 

[Kusachu]

That looks great lee-nus! XD

 

[lee-nus]

yahooo! thanks, babe!

 

[donkeyhigh]

Great work
I really liked the choice of colors, as they fit perfectly together

 

[lee-nus]

Great work
I really liked the choice of colors, as they fit perfectly together

thanks a bunch! i doubted myself a little on this at first, but it came out okay i guess... ^^

 

[angry]

Good stuff, i think you could improve fairly easy on his hair, by making his hair parting curved instead of straight.

Greets, Angry

 

[lee-nus]

Good stuff, i think you could improve fairly easy on his hair, by making his hair parting curved instead of straight.

Greets, Angry

uhhh... how do you mean? did you mean partially curved or something? otherwise, im afraid you lost me! thanks for the constructive feedback, though!

 

[angry]

and here i thought i was super clear in explaning T_T (j/k)

hehe, i made an image to explain it:

1: straight hair parting
2: curved hair parting

I think it would look better if the hair parting was more curved, like in line 2. Ofc, thats just my opinion ^^

Greets, Angry

(yea i'm rly bored waiting for chapter 318 >.<)

 

[lee-nus]

ah, i see your point, and it is a good one! maybe i overlooked that! thanks for the thorough explanation, i'll see what i can do about it!


edit: you were absolutely right, angry! i did change it a little, and like it better already. i wonder why i didnt see it before, though... ^^ the updated picture can be found on the same address:

http://www.deviantart.com/view/37337073/

want me to curve the hair even more? :P

 

[angry]

MORE CURVES!!! MORE!!!!!!

=P

Indeed, it looks alot better now ^^

 

[lee-nus]

MORE CURVES!!! MORE!!!!!!

=P

Indeed, it looks alot better now ^^

you want even more? i didnt really think it looked natural when i curved the line... well, i'll give it another go, for you...

edit: done! it turned out better after i put some more effort into it. my head is killing me, so no more updating now. maybe i'll try curving it even more later, but for now, i need a break! thanks again for your feedback[br]Posted on: August 03, 2006, 10:26:11 AM_________________________________________________i made another version too, with stronger moon beams. which do you think is better? this one was kinda rough and took only a few minutes to make, so i'd improve it if u guys think its better...

 

[angry]

haha i was just kidding about the 'MORE CURVES' =P

The moonbeams look good, i think this last version is the best of all.

 

[lee-nus]

haha i was just kidding about the 'MORE CURVES' =P

The moonbeams look good, i think this last version is the best of all.

lol, damn u!
okay, goodie! then i'll improve it to the best of my abilites (or as much as my lazy self allows) as soon as my headache decides to go a little easy on me... ^^

 

[destinator]

Really cool idea I love it!

 

[lee-nus]

Really cool idea I love it!

thanks des! guess you're one of the big art crits here, so im happy you like it!

 

[vlado]

greate job , didn't know you could also soft shade...

 

[lee-nus]

greate job , didn't know you could also soft shade...

haha, im a man of many abilities! jokes set aside, glad you like it. you usually seem hard to please, so its quite an honor...