I won't kill you

[undying]

It's been long time since my last art
I'm still improving my style ! Lol



Lines

 

[Googlez_kun]

nice,nice,nice!!

 

[tubeyo]

Sorry to point out that the shading is pretty the same of Rss'... btw his version is still better.
The lineart could be better too, the pupils aren't the same size, some curves are too rough-edge, and it misses some dynamic.
I know you can do better

 

[- aMt -]

cool colors, but really the lines not is good ^^

nots bad. keep it

 

[lee-nus]

i think you were a bit lazy with this. the colors could have been done in 15 minutes without surprising me. also, for an image lacking in detail, its not a good thing to make it so big, it just makes it more obvious.

also, i wonder why almost all artists here lack the ability to do something creative and unique. out of ten colorings, at least three have the plain white glowing background, and eight out of those ten follow the exact shading in the manga... that is just too boring for me... :S

 

[- aMt -]

Follow what he(linus) says you will improve much.

If so try your luck with "soft shade"

 

[Jaime F.]

Good job for the most part Undying, I like it.