It's time to put down my pen

[White Angel]

(Reads Naruto Manga CH.383) .. "I guess .. Its time to put down my pen"
couldn't resist until I draw something about this Legendary Sannin "Jiraiya"

http://white--angel-7.deviantart.com/art/It-s-time-to-put-down-my-pen-74929964

well hope you like it! ^_^

 

[TheChosenOne]

Like it, the hands kinda don't match to Jiraiya's body, but his face is perfect.

 

[lordHokage]

I like it. I agree with TheChosenOne. Keep it up.

 

[Ragna-sama]

Good, but I think they look too slim.

 

[Baka Taichou]

ohhh nice fan art! It looks great!!!!! will you color it too ? and I like the hand too you have a bit different style from kishimoto in drawing bodies but that's A GOOD THING! every artist should be unique Keep up the good work

 

[weixiaobao]

Jiraya's right hand is a bit awkward, the left one is ok.... really nice job..

 

[Gold Knight]

I actually like the left hand OK. Very fluid, and anyway you have to make allowances for other people's artistic styles.

The main problem I have with this very nice fanart is Jiraiya's right shoulder isn't big enough and his right arm seems rather thin.

I really like the concept though, and it's nicely done for the most part, White Angel. As said above, Jiraiya's face is done perfectly. I also like Naruto a lot here too (though you might have had his protector a little too low.) Do more!