Kakashi Team Lineart

[aronluna]

Ok, my last picture is just a garbage, but im making a new and im hope to this like then.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/55063777/

 

[kyuubiseal]

er....not sure what to say :P but it is well done.......i like the sasuke at the background. Naruto is not bad but just the pant's look a bit wierd. Don't push this in, after all i know that my lineart would be much worse than this so you are awesome man keep it up! woot!

 

[*Mel*]

Cool =D
I kinda of agree with kyuubiseal...But...anyway...
How do u do your lineart?? it is pretty clean ^^

 

[TechnoMagus]

WOW! waaaay much better than the last-time!

i see you've added perspective to your lineart. taking art classes btw?

you need to practice drawing more....errrr.....hands.....
a little distorted, some bg lines are clearly intersecting with them...but only obvious when viewed closely.....

good work! keep up and don't give up!

 

[LotusBlade]

Naruto looks so much more improved than the last picture I saw that you drew. His eyes are much better, keep up the improvements

 

[aronluna]

thx, my last eyes not was very nice, but im work in this to this and future draws, thx for the critics, the critics make me better.

 

[bax]

Much improvements ofcourse.. Like everyone is saying.. Just keep on practicing