Kakashi vs Pain

Jaime F.

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Not to bad Madara, I like a lot of colors you used. It kind of reminds me of the same colors JMC used, for his coloring of the second panel of this page. There are couple awkward areas, that are colored strangely, but it's so subtle that it's difficult to notice them. 1 area I'm talking about in particular, is the blue part of Kakashi's pants on his left thigh. I think the chakra conducting pole should be colored darker to, but I can see why you didn't color it black. It wouldn't look right if the pole was black, because the page is black, and so is the large text in the same panel. Well anyways, it looks like you're making some good progress, so good job. By the way, who did the lineart, or rather who cleaned this page before you colored it? Just so you know, next time you color a page, or panel, include Kishimoto's name, with yours, and the artist who cleaned the page. For example, the artist Shade, who cleans a lot of the Naruto lineart for the other artists here, will usually get upset if you color over, or erase his name off the page he cleaned. I only see your name on this page, which is supposed to be there, but Kishimoto's name, and the person who cleaned the page for you, both their names should be included there as well. If you know how to, you should put Ziaja's name back on the page, and add Kishimoto's name as well.
 
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These're Ziaja's lines you've to credit him, not to erase his signature so grossly...
by the way it's nice, but you could do better :)
 

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Usa la penna per colorare e non il secchiello. Certo se pratichi molto , migliori di sicuro.
 

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The coloring on the characters are nice, but the background seems really rushed, there's a lot of sloppy shading on the buildings and rubble. Also, didn't Ziaja make the lines that you used for this coloring?
 
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fucking man now add my creddits !!!!!!!1
 

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sorry ziaya
I needed a black frame I din't want to get angry
I did not know this thing of credits
now add
 
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can i have the lines?
 
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