Kiba Kun

[thewar]

Another FanArt Comments/Critic

Line Art with open canvas

 

[Jaime F.]

Wow, still no comments? Well thewar, I guess i'll have to leave a comment for you then. I hope you don't mind my criticisms. Well honestly, although I think the idea concept is cool, I think you could of done a lot better over all. I think it was cool idea to include Kiba's name written in the Japanese text, but the rest if of it needs to be more accurate in terms of size, and details. For instance I think Kiba's hand looks a little bit to big in comparison to his body. Also, it wouldn't hurt if you made Kiba look a little more like the original way he looks through kishimoto's hands. Although it's good to be orginal, and not copy Kishimoto's style line per line, it's not a bad thing if they're similar. Well, I hope you didn't mind my critique of your fan art. I'm sure you'll keep getting better with practice, so don't give up. Even if you're not at the skill level you want to be at right now, be patient, and keep practicing. You'll eventually get there, i'm sure. Also, start trying to include shadows in your art as well, that will definetly make your art look better.