Not the best lines, but it's your only your second attempt at it, so don't feel to bad about it. Your lines look blurry to me, and you should try to always close up all the areas where there might be a difference in color later. In particular, the line for Lilinet's outer right shoulder doesn't completely go all the way down to the panels bottom border. It's an easy problem to fix though, and even the artist coloring it could fix it without to much effort. Anyways, It's funny to see Lilinet with that facial expression, because she's usually so confident, and spunky. I thought it was kind of cool that her Cero came out of her eye socket though, and that whole seen, I thought, was pretty cool. Well, don't stop trying, and keep it up. I'm sure you'll improve if you don't give up.
