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Not too much to note this week... but here's a go. This time, original text is in italics... and my flavours in bold. I also highlighted some of the larger differences with an asterik.
505: Kyuubi chakra, unleashed
P3
His mother's parting thoughts resonate with Naruto
Technically - written as the mother's thoughts not words that was referred to here.
Naruto: I promise I'll eat more than ramen from now on... I'll work in the vegetables.
Naruto: From here on out.... I'll each my vegetables, and not just ramen all the time...
Naruto: I love hopping in a hot bath so no worries there... and I get plenty of sleep, probably too much!
Naruto: I love to bathe - so don't worry... I frequently go to the hot springs.
And I am always getting plenty of sleep... actually maybe a little too much!
Naruto: As for friends, I've got plenty and they're all wonderful people!
I just wish you could've met them...
Naruto: And as for friends, I've been able to make a lot of good ones.
I would have wanted you to meet them...
Naruto talks about good 'Friends' in the context of making friends, and not necessarily calling them wonderful individuals.
P4
Naruto: Although one in particular's been giving me a lot of grief lately!
Naruto: ...but there's one (friend) I am not doing so well with...
no mention of been given any grief... just describing how one freindship is not going as well as Naruto would like it.
*Naruto: I am Uzumaki Naruto, Ninja of the hidden leaf. My dream is to become Hokage! One to surpass all the previous Hokages
Naruto: I am Uzumaki Naruto, a ninja of Konoha.
My dream is to succeed the title of Hokage
and to surpass all the previous Hokages
Note: it is referred to as the 'title of Hokage' and this is mentioned several times in series. WARNING - SPECULATION: This MAY implicate that Naruto may not live long enough to become Hokage, and leaves the possibility to obtain the honor of Hokage after death. It's likely that these separate "hidden villages" will deteriorate eventually, and it would be in agreement with the peaceful world of shinobi that one would like to envision.
p5
Naruto: to become a bigger badass than my father
to become a stronger shinobi than my mother
Naruto: and I'll become an even better man than my father
and become a more powerful shinobi than my mother
...badass....?
p6
Naruto: Hell Yeah
Naruto: Ossha~! translates to: Yeah~!
the'hell' context is a bit off and slightly out of his character.
P7
Bee: I feel ya, I feel ya... nice man,
nice. The look on your face is cool as ice.
Bee: I see, that's what happened - understood, ryoukai!
your face is - calm and cool, ryoukan!
Japanese, as you know is a phonetic language, making rhymes with words a lot easier than the English language. I really like the mangastream translations - but I will try my best to stick with this format of literal translation: blah blah blah - ENGLISH translation, Japanese term (that is rhymed). Learn a Japanese word with every Bee rhyme! ^^;
Bee: Good stuff, man. Especially this... oh and that...
Bee: well... thank goodness...
especially - that, are and - this, kore was yo!
p8
Bee: Whooooa naruto you pilled that off?!
sheeet!
Bee: WHooo! Naruto - by THIS did you maybe mean...
*Gai: Youthful energy is racing through every inch of my body
Gai: Although it's what being young* is about, I cannot leave a youngster
struggling!
*Gai often refers to the young years - or seishun - which refers to adolescence.
Konoha with glasses (sorry forgot his name): sorry this is uh just how he is
Konoha with glasses: this person's a bit... unique... i'm sorry...
p9
*Naruto: But check out what happens when i do!
Naruto: This is what it's like when i use it...
Much more humble in tone - he's not trying to showing off his new abilities, but more like sharing information as to how he conquered the Kyuubi chakra.
p10
Naruto: thought you could hide, huh?
Naruto: you call that hiding?
Bee: He detected a presence, we both been remiss!
Talk about intense, I didn't even notice!
Bee: You can feel a different - presence, sonzai
since I didn't notice I must be - careless, zonzai
p11
Kisame: Not even the most astute sensor-types are capable of that... gaining control of the nine-tails has afforded you interesting new powers
Kisame: that is somewhat unique from all known sensory-types - this must be the power of a Jinchuuriki who has controlled the Kyuubi
p12
Naruto: shark-scumbag
Naruto: shark-dude
Bee: What? We sliced this guys head off back in the forest!
You tellin' me our tag attack actually missed?
Bee: Why? We lopped off his head at that time - for sure, hazu.
How did you make our tag attack - miss, hazushita?
Bee: Man that doesn't hold water, we had a dead body!
Even after the slaughter, if it was someone in discuise C would've sensed the difference - your story's all shoddy!
Bee: We did confirm a dead body, so this is - puzzling, gimon.
it someone else transformed into you, our C should have noticed, this is a - problem, nanmon.
Kisame: It was a unique type of clone, a living being that can be controlled remotely... but let's move on, shall we?
Kisame: It's actually a special clone...it's a parasitic clone that can
manipulate my a being from afar...let's leave the details at that...
Kisame: I've been spying on you the whole time.
Kisame: I DID come here as a spy you know...
p13
*Bee: Teleport technique and a right handed smash
but all i saw...was a yellow flash!
Bee: Is it the Shunshin technique? Got the - lead-off attack, senkou
It's as if he's the yellow - flash, senkou!
Refers to a shunshin technique... not a teleportation technique. Shunshin means "Body-flicker" - but Kishimoto is not saying that Naruto has mastered Minato's Hiraishin technique... I think he is just implicating that it may be similar.
p14
Yamato: He's not quite at the fourth's level yet
Yamato: he can't seem to do it quite like the fourth
No mention of 'level' but simply saying that Naruto can't 'pull it off' quite like the Fourth did. Keep in mind that grace and execution are not really part of Naruto's character. He clearly gets this other side from his mother.
*Bee: I'm on his ass
like white on rice
Bee: leave it to me to - follow, tuiseki
and then follow with an - attack, tuigeki
p15
Gai: You fool! There's no time, I'm here to cheer Naruto on!
Gai: Nonsense! There's no time, I'm here to cheer Naruto on!
Gai's not calling the other Konoha a 'fool'
p17
Gai: You err, me!
I'm going to beat your lost youth into you!
Gai: You! Who forgot their youth (adolescence)!
I'll pound your spirit back into alignment!
*p18
text at bottom:
Next issue: Gai vs. Kisame...!!
and the Great Ninja War to break out!
505: Kyuubi chakra, unleashed
P3
His mother's parting thoughts resonate with Naruto
Technically - written as the mother's thoughts not words that was referred to here.
Naruto: I promise I'll eat more than ramen from now on... I'll work in the vegetables.
Naruto: From here on out.... I'll each my vegetables, and not just ramen all the time...
Naruto: I love hopping in a hot bath so no worries there... and I get plenty of sleep, probably too much!
Naruto: I love to bathe - so don't worry... I frequently go to the hot springs.
And I am always getting plenty of sleep... actually maybe a little too much!
Naruto: As for friends, I've got plenty and they're all wonderful people!
I just wish you could've met them...
Naruto: And as for friends, I've been able to make a lot of good ones.
I would have wanted you to meet them...
Naruto talks about good 'Friends' in the context of making friends, and not necessarily calling them wonderful individuals.
P4
Naruto: Although one in particular's been giving me a lot of grief lately!
Naruto: ...but there's one (friend) I am not doing so well with...
no mention of been given any grief... just describing how one freindship is not going as well as Naruto would like it.
*Naruto: I am Uzumaki Naruto, Ninja of the hidden leaf. My dream is to become Hokage! One to surpass all the previous Hokages
Naruto: I am Uzumaki Naruto, a ninja of Konoha.
My dream is to succeed the title of Hokage
and to surpass all the previous Hokages
Note: it is referred to as the 'title of Hokage' and this is mentioned several times in series. WARNING - SPECULATION: This MAY implicate that Naruto may not live long enough to become Hokage, and leaves the possibility to obtain the honor of Hokage after death. It's likely that these separate "hidden villages" will deteriorate eventually, and it would be in agreement with the peaceful world of shinobi that one would like to envision.
p5
Naruto: to become a bigger badass than my father
to become a stronger shinobi than my mother
Naruto: and I'll become an even better man than my father
and become a more powerful shinobi than my mother
...badass....?
p6
Naruto: Hell Yeah
Naruto: Ossha~! translates to: Yeah~!
the'hell' context is a bit off and slightly out of his character.
P7
Bee: I feel ya, I feel ya... nice man,
nice. The look on your face is cool as ice.
Bee: I see, that's what happened - understood, ryoukai!
your face is - calm and cool, ryoukan!
Japanese, as you know is a phonetic language, making rhymes with words a lot easier than the English language. I really like the mangastream translations - but I will try my best to stick with this format of literal translation: blah blah blah - ENGLISH translation, Japanese term (that is rhymed). Learn a Japanese word with every Bee rhyme! ^^;
Bee: Good stuff, man. Especially this... oh and that...
Bee: well... thank goodness...
especially - that, are and - this, kore was yo!
p8
Bee: Whooooa naruto you pilled that off?!
sheeet!
Bee: WHooo! Naruto - by THIS did you maybe mean...
*Gai: Youthful energy is racing through every inch of my body
Gai: Although it's what being young* is about, I cannot leave a youngster
struggling!
*Gai often refers to the young years - or seishun - which refers to adolescence.
Konoha with glasses (sorry forgot his name): sorry this is uh just how he is
Konoha with glasses: this person's a bit... unique... i'm sorry...
p9
*Naruto: But check out what happens when i do!
Naruto: This is what it's like when i use it...
Much more humble in tone - he's not trying to showing off his new abilities, but more like sharing information as to how he conquered the Kyuubi chakra.
p10
Naruto: thought you could hide, huh?
Naruto: you call that hiding?
Bee: He detected a presence, we both been remiss!
Talk about intense, I didn't even notice!
Bee: You can feel a different - presence, sonzai
since I didn't notice I must be - careless, zonzai
p11
Kisame: Not even the most astute sensor-types are capable of that... gaining control of the nine-tails has afforded you interesting new powers
Kisame: that is somewhat unique from all known sensory-types - this must be the power of a Jinchuuriki who has controlled the Kyuubi
p12
Naruto: shark-scumbag
Naruto: shark-dude
Bee: What? We sliced this guys head off back in the forest!
You tellin' me our tag attack actually missed?
Bee: Why? We lopped off his head at that time - for sure, hazu.
How did you make our tag attack - miss, hazushita?
Bee: Man that doesn't hold water, we had a dead body!
Even after the slaughter, if it was someone in discuise C would've sensed the difference - your story's all shoddy!
Bee: We did confirm a dead body, so this is - puzzling, gimon.
it someone else transformed into you, our C should have noticed, this is a - problem, nanmon.
Kisame: It was a unique type of clone, a living being that can be controlled remotely... but let's move on, shall we?
Kisame: It's actually a special clone...it's a parasitic clone that can
manipulate my a being from afar...let's leave the details at that...
Kisame: I've been spying on you the whole time.
Kisame: I DID come here as a spy you know...
p13
*Bee: Teleport technique and a right handed smash
but all i saw...was a yellow flash!
Bee: Is it the Shunshin technique? Got the - lead-off attack, senkou
It's as if he's the yellow - flash, senkou!
Refers to a shunshin technique... not a teleportation technique. Shunshin means "Body-flicker" - but Kishimoto is not saying that Naruto has mastered Minato's Hiraishin technique... I think he is just implicating that it may be similar.
p14
Yamato: He's not quite at the fourth's level yet
Yamato: he can't seem to do it quite like the fourth
No mention of 'level' but simply saying that Naruto can't 'pull it off' quite like the Fourth did. Keep in mind that grace and execution are not really part of Naruto's character. He clearly gets this other side from his mother.
*Bee: I'm on his ass
like white on rice
Bee: leave it to me to - follow, tuiseki
and then follow with an - attack, tuigeki
p15
Gai: You fool! There's no time, I'm here to cheer Naruto on!
Gai: Nonsense! There's no time, I'm here to cheer Naruto on!
Gai's not calling the other Konoha a 'fool'
p17
Gai: You err, me!
I'm going to beat your lost youth into you!
Gai: You! Who forgot their youth (adolescence)!
I'll pound your spirit back into alignment!
*p18
text at bottom:
Next issue: Gai vs. Kisame...!!
and the Great Ninja War to break out!
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