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I've picked up Mitsudomoe and I'm stuck on a couple lines in chapter 1, both on page 16 of volume 1.
Here is my current script for the page, with trouble spots bolded. I'll talk a bit more about them below.
ザケル (雰囲気で言ってみた)
ばしこーん
ばぶ
Back off! (tried going along with the mood)
sfx: bashiko~n (ka-paff)
Mrff
え。。。
愛欲まみれの踊り場で。。。
人妻
肉欲日誌
お昼休み ウキウキ ○開帳
エロ本だー!!
あっはーん
Er-...
low right: On the passion-drenched dancefloor..
sign: A married woman's
black: diary of carnal lusts
sign: Lunch hour casual encounters (***fudged)
Erotic fiction...!!
white: sfx: Ahha~n (moan)
団地妻の
白昼夢がーあぁ
A stay-at-home wife's
waking dreeeam...?
結局ー
なんでボクが宿題を。。。。
top right float: In the end...
Why am I doing the homework...
In panel 2, ザケル, is said by a girl who speaks in a slightly old-fashioned way sometimes. But she does not normally speak roughly or rudely. The guy is about to steal her seat in musical chairs.
In panel 4, the sign that begins お昼休み. I can't even read the first kanji of the last word, ○開帳. There's no context outside that panel.
thanks for looking
Here is my current script for the page, with trouble spots bolded. I'll talk a bit more about them below.
ザケル (雰囲気で言ってみた)
ばしこーん
ばぶ
Back off! (tried going along with the mood)
sfx: bashiko~n (ka-paff)
Mrff
え。。。
愛欲まみれの踊り場で。。。
人妻
肉欲日誌
お昼休み ウキウキ ○開帳
エロ本だー!!
あっはーん
Er-...
low right: On the passion-drenched dancefloor..
sign: A married woman's
black: diary of carnal lusts
sign: Lunch hour casual encounters (***fudged)
Erotic fiction...!!
white: sfx: Ahha~n (moan)
団地妻の
白昼夢がーあぁ
A stay-at-home wife's
waking dreeeam...?
結局ー
なんでボクが宿題を。。。。
top right float: In the end...
Why am I doing the homework...
In panel 2, ザケル, is said by a girl who speaks in a slightly old-fashioned way sometimes. But she does not normally speak roughly or rudely. The guy is about to steal her seat in musical chairs.
In panel 4, the sign that begins お昼休み. I can't even read the first kanji of the last word, ○開帳. There's no context outside that panel.
thanks for looking

