here's the completed comic! wow it's terrible but I really tried
thanks americandream! haha wow that's really flattering ;_; though I really have no idea what I'm doing!! When I finally got to the most satisfying page of leorio punching kurapika I really noticed how simplistic and probably terribly confusing my paneling is...
This page where leorio punches ging (GJ leorio!!) has so much going on. Togashi builds up all this tension; shock, staredown, clenching of the fist, pulling back, BAAAM, reactions, teleported punch impending...
I totally missed the mark LOL. I started off all melancholy/mellow and then jumped straight into punching?! there's just no flow
I really should've planned this out more haha; but this was a good learning experience!! I might want to comic more in the future
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biscuit for crudecross !
holymoly i've been drawing non stop all day