Misc Attempt My first attemp please help!

Boomsickle

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So yeah i wanted to get into the scene so here is my attempt at cleaning please give me some advice and what i should do to make it better =D


Original Raw




Cleaned

 

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the raw is a little bad for a tank, anyway, try to resize to 2000 px Height before levelling, put it to grey scale, don't use filters and do less levelling, grey doesn't have to become black
 

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Everything progste said (except the part about resizing to 2000px before levelling, I don't see the point). You definitely overlevelled. The sky and the girl look much darker than they should be.

If you want the hair to be black and the raw won't cooperate, just level a reasonable amount and then darken the hair manually with the burn tool. For spiky hair you can select the hair with the lasso and color it black.

Remember, for bad raws, less is more.
 
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ummmm actually i think the Raw is cleaner than the cleaned ,
 
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